slop refactor

2 files changed, 30 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/data/rooms/intro/1001.yaml b/data/rooms/intro/1001.yaml
index 543acea..090e97c 100644
--- a/data/rooms/intro/1001.yaml
+++ b/data/rooms/intro/1001.yaml
@@ -1,6 +1,27 @@
 name: "Inside Transport Shuttle"
-description: "A dim, metallic shuttle interior with a few uncomfortable rows of steel seats. A large framed sign hangs next to the closed cockpit door. A piston-powered staircase leads down out the back of the small craft."
+description: "A dim, windowless shuttle interior with a few uncomfortable rows of steel seats facing forward. A large framed sign hangs next to the closed cockpit door. A piston-powered staircase leads down out the back of the small craft with a smiling attendant ready to help disembark."
 objects:
   - id: 1001_sign
 exits:
   down: 1002
+    condition:
+      player_flag: 1001_look_sign
+    blocked_message: "The attendant points to the sign and insists you 'look sign' before disembarking."
+on_enter:
+  - condition:
+      player_flag: 1001_welcome
+      not: true
+    delay: 5
+    message: "{11 bold}Welcome to The House of Icarus{/}"
+  - condition:
+      player_flag: 1001_welcome
+      not: true
+    delay: 7
+    message: "{11}Type 'look sign' to check out the sign over there and get started{/}"
+    set_player_flags:
+      1001_welcome: true
+  - condition:
+      player_flag: 1001_welcome
+      not: true
+    delay: 7
+    message: "{11}Type 'help newplayer' for the new player's guide. That's it. Explore and have fun.{/}"
diff --git a/data/rooms/intro/1002.yaml b/data/rooms/intro/1002.yaml
index 9bcbd76..6e45ed7 100644
--- a/data/rooms/intro/1002.yaml
+++ b/data/rooms/intro/1002.yaml
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 name: "Landing Pad"
-description: "A large, circular, concrete landing pad sits empty in the middle of a blue ocean surrounded by black netting to catch anyone careless enough to fall off. Waves quietly lick the structural pylons as they roll towards the nearby beach. North is a short, wide concrete through a small, doorless red building with a wooden sign above the entryway reading \"Vesta Customs\""
-descriptions:
+description:
   - condition:
       player_flag: 1002_intro_done
       not: true
     text: "A large, circular, concrete landing pad sits in the middle of a blue ocean with a transport shuttle taking up nearly all of the walkable area. A crowd of perhaps a dozen people are shambling of a squat, doorless building to the north. A sign above the entryway reads \"Vesta Customs\""
+  - text: "A large, circular, concrete landing pad sits empty in the middle of a blue ocean surrounded by black netting to catch anyone careless enough to fall off. Waves quietly lick the structural pylons as they roll towards the nearby beach. North is a short, wide concrete through a small, doorless red building with a wooden sign above the entryway reading \"Vesta Customs\""
 objects:
   - id: 1002_crowd
   - id: 1002_shuttle
@@ -26,17 +26,17 @@ on_enter:
   - condition:
       player_flag: 1002_lined_up
       not: true
-    delay: 5
+    delay: 7
     message: "A few in the crowd openly look you up and down consideringly, as if you're heading the wrong direction."
   - condition:
       player_flag: 1002_lined_up
       not: true
-    delay: 5
+    delay: 7
     message: "The pilot pops out of the hatch of the craft and calls out, \"Shuttle to Passenger Barge Denali. Tickets out, please! Nice and orderly!\""
-    set_player_flags:
-      1002_lined_up: true
   - condition:
-      player_flag: 1002_lined up
+      player_flag: 1002_lined_up
       not: true
-    delay: 3
+    delay: 7
     message: "The people shamble into a line, dragging their luggage out of the narrow path to clear the way for you."
+    set_player_flags:
+      1002_lined_up: true